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Six Sentence Sunday #5

Greetings, Kittens!

Thank you for coming by again this week. The following is a little after last week's offering from DAWN'S EARLY LIGHT. It's still Ajay and Kincaid being observed by Mackenzie.

Enjoy.



It happened so quickly, Mackenzie missed the smaller details. One moment they were facing each other, the belt in both their hands and the tension between them threatening to take on physical form. The next moment Ajay’s upper body lay face-down across the dresser in the center of the closet, the belt cinched tight over his wrists, the end wrapped several times around Kincaid’s right hand.

“Don’t fight me, Ajay."

It took several tries for Ajay to form the panting breaths into words. “That would defeat the purpose.”



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Lisa Fox
Jul. 17th, 2011 12:28 pm (UTC)
HOT! Wow.
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:05 am (UTC)
Thanks! :)
romancingalix.wordpress.com
Jul. 17th, 2011 01:16 pm (UTC)
Super hot and super WOW. I love you picked this snippet!
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:05 am (UTC)
I love that you recognized it! *grin*
SandraSookoo
Jul. 17th, 2011 01:23 pm (UTC)
Now that is a hot predicament!
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:06 am (UTC)
Indeed and it goes all the right places. *wink*
Stacey_Kennedy
Jul. 17th, 2011 01:54 pm (UTC)
Dear Lord that was a sizzling snippet! *shivers* *fans self* I WANT MORE!! I have to get this book!
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:06 am (UTC)
I'd love your feedback when you do! :)

Ranae Rose
Jul. 17th, 2011 02:42 pm (UTC)
Oh, intense. I like! :)
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:07 am (UTC)
Thank you!
lizculver.wordpress.com
Jul. 17th, 2011 04:22 pm (UTC)
Oh my! Sexy six!
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:09 am (UTC)
Thanks, it's a favorite scene!
dee_carney
Jul. 17th, 2011 05:13 pm (UTC)
Nicely done! More please!
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:21 am (UTC)
As you wish! *grin*
(Anonymous)
Jul. 17th, 2011 06:55 pm (UTC)
Wow, that was fast! Somebody's in trouble now.

Cara Bristol
http://www.carabristol.com
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:22 am (UTC)
*Grin*
(Anonymous)
Jul. 17th, 2011 07:58 pm (UTC)
Oh, yeah.
Nicely done! Can't wait to read more!
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:22 am (UTC)
Re: Oh, yeah.
Thank you! I can't wait to share more! :)
SGrimmAuthor
Jul. 17th, 2011 07:59 pm (UTC)
Oops
Forgot to change it off anonymous. That last comment was from me. :)
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:23 am (UTC)
Re: Oops
No problem, thanks for letting me know.
(Anonymous)
Jul. 17th, 2011 10:22 pm (UTC)
Guess someone should have paid attention to the details.
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:23 am (UTC)
It's all about the details that come next! *grin*
JoAnne Kenrick
Jul. 17th, 2011 11:36 pm (UTC)
intense, fast action -- doesn't look like Ajay is too unhappy about the predicament, though LOL Fab six xx
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:24 am (UTC)
Nope, he's not. It's just where he wanted to be. :)
BreeYounger
Jul. 18th, 2011 12:58 am (UTC)
Wow! Great emotional snippet.
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:24 am (UTC)
Thank you. :)
diannehartsock.wordpress.com
Jul. 18th, 2011 03:23 am (UTC)
Wow. Very nice set-up for the next scene! Next week?
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:25 am (UTC)
Yep. Next week it is. :)
(Anonymous)
Jul. 18th, 2011 04:54 am (UTC)
Whew! That's intense. And so hot.
xakara
Jul. 18th, 2011 05:25 am (UTC)
Thank you, I appreciate it. :)
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