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Six Sentence Sunday #11 Saint Valentine

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Somber Greetings, Kittens!

In light of the day, I've moved from my more comedic offerings from A Way To A Dragon's Heart and back to my PsiCorps series. This is PsiCorps #3, tentatively titled Saint Valentine.

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“I don’t care,” she interrupted. “I cared when you came in, but we’ve passed that point, so let me tell you my name instead. I’m Agent Riley Valin, but there are quite a few that use Kali Valin, I’m open to both; either way, you need to go and say those names to someone who’s been in the building more than two minutes. Otherwise you need to rapidly experience the good fortune of spinning the wheel and buying a clue, so you know where you stand in this situation.”

"So what, you’re The Doctor in this situation?” he laughed.

Riley smiled, “My inner geek loves you just a little bit for that fandom reference, but my outer bitch is about to hurt your sense of self-esteem.”

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(Anonymous)
Sep. 11th, 2011 01:36 pm (UTC)
I had a chuckle at The Doctor reference.

She does sound like she's going to inflict some pain if he doesn't listen.

Happy Six, Xakara!

Amy Ruttan
www.amyruttan.com
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xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 07:58 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that the reference to The Doctor made you smile! It was awesome to have the chance to slip it in there. :)

~X
melyndaprice.wordpress.com
Sep. 11th, 2011 01:43 pm (UTC)
SSS
LOL! I love the last line :)
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 07:58 pm (UTC)
Re: SSS
Thanks! It's a favorite :)

~X
GemmaPar
Sep. 11th, 2011 02:24 pm (UTC)
six sentence sunday
I loved the last line too! Brilliant!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 07:59 pm (UTC)
Re: six sentence sunday
Thanks, Gemma! It was so much fun to write :)

~X
Cassandra Carr
Sep. 11th, 2011 02:26 pm (UTC)
Love the characterization
Gotta love a kick-ass heroine!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:00 pm (UTC)
Re: Love the characterization
Right? Riley is one of my favorites :)

~X
Taryn Kincaid
Sep. 11th, 2011 02:35 pm (UTC)
Intriguing!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you :)

~X
LisaFoxRomance
Sep. 11th, 2011 02:37 pm (UTC)
That last line is excellent!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:01 pm (UTC)
Thanks, I appreciate it, Lisa! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Sep. 11th, 2011 02:52 pm (UTC)
Love the Six
What's not to love about a K-A heroine? Anya
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:03 pm (UTC)
Re: Love the Six
I know, they just make you smile! :)

~X
Cherie Marks
Sep. 11th, 2011 03:00 pm (UTC)
Cherie Marks' comment
Tough chick! Now it's on! Great six!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:04 pm (UTC)
Re: Cherie Marks' comment
Yep, it's reach that point where he better recognize! :)

~X
Gem Sivad
Sep. 11th, 2011 03:20 pm (UTC)
SSS
I don't think she's impressed with him--and he should probably worry about that. Great six!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:05 pm (UTC)
Re: SSS
Yep, he should definitely worry about it! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Sep. 11th, 2011 04:01 pm (UTC)
Sandi Sookoo
Oh, I love the duality of her character!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:06 pm (UTC)
Re: Sandi Sookoo
So do I! I'm so glad it came through so clearly :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Sep. 11th, 2011 05:02 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Spinning the wheel and buying a clue! Loved that line, nice work :)

Kelly Said
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much, it makes me smile :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Sep. 11th, 2011 05:30 pm (UTC)
Inner/Outer
I love "inner geek" and "outer bitch." Good writing.

Sandy N. - http://iousex.blogspot.com
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:09 pm (UTC)
Re: Inner/Outer
Thanks, I appreciate it1 :)

~X
romancingAlix
Sep. 11th, 2011 06:13 pm (UTC)
Inner geek and outer bitch..I love it.
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:10 pm (UTC)
I thought you might. *grin*

~X
kimfaulks.wordpress.com
Sep. 11th, 2011 06:18 pm (UTC)
SSS 11/9
Ohh, what a nasty bitch! I LOVE her. Excellent six and look forward to reading more.
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:10 pm (UTC)
Re: SSS 11/9
Thanks! :)

~X
srlmort
Sep. 11th, 2011 06:26 pm (UTC)
OOh I love it hunny!

I cant wait to open these books and begin reading.

:D Feel better soon and thx for the support!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:11 pm (UTC)
Thanks, I'm getting there on the feeling better part of things! :)

~X
SGrimmAuthor
Sep. 11th, 2011 08:31 pm (UTC)
Excellent
Excellent six! I can't wait to read more.
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:11 pm (UTC)
Re: Excellent
I can't wait until it's out! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Sep. 11th, 2011 08:47 pm (UTC)
Wow, she told him! This sounds so great! :)
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! :)

~X
sonyaclark.net
Sep. 11th, 2011 09:36 pm (UTC)
Great six! I love Riley's attitude.
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:12 pm (UTC)
She's awesome! I have a lot of fun with her. :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Sep. 11th, 2011 11:51 pm (UTC)
Love the last line. Great hook
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Sep. 12th, 2011 01:09 am (UTC)
Great SIx!!
HA! LOVED that last line!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:13 pm (UTC)
Re: Great SIx!!
Thanks! :)

~X
lexcade
Sep. 12th, 2011 06:48 pm (UTC)
Hehehe. Riley sounds AWESOME. I can't wait for this one, Xakara!
xakara
Sep. 12th, 2011 08:15 pm (UTC)
She's my second fave that I've written after Dante. The thing she has on Dante is that Riley has a very clear sense of who she is, even in the midst of great change. It's great to get to write her! :)

~X
j h
Sep. 13th, 2011 01:34 am (UTC)
awesome last line!
...Seriously, I think it's the best i've read out of all the SSS so far (and I read every last one, except the smutty ones ;p)
xakara
Sep. 13th, 2011 02:42 am (UTC)
Re: awesome last line!
Thank you so much! I really appreciate that :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Sep. 13th, 2011 08:32 am (UTC)
SSS Response 9/11
Totally AWESOME! Love Riley's response!!!

Kathleen Grieve
www.kathleengrieve.com
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