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Six Sentence Sunday #8

AWTADH

Greetings, Kittens!

Here's a bit more of A WAY TO A DRAGON'S HEART. It's more or less right after the last entry and still between Kryssa, (who the temp keeps referring to as Chrissie), and our temp from "the cheerleading rung of hell". *grin* Kryssa is speaking around a mouth full of crunchy veggies.

If you wish to catch up. First, Second, & Third offerings of AWTADH.

Enjoy.

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"So, um, just between us girls, have you ever eaten anyone, Chrissie?”

“No, but give me a minute," Kryssa said.

"I'm sorry," Big blue Bambi eyes blinked over at her, "I didn’t understand you.”

I’m not the only thing she doesn’t understand by a long shot.
“I said give me a minute, I have to take care of something,but you can familiarize yourself with the snack machine.” Kryssa backed away slowly, the way you escape from a dog you think might be rabid; or in this case, severely mentally stunted, and therefore dangerous to your dry cleaning bill with the slobbering and the pawing.

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romancingAlix
Aug. 14th, 2011 06:22 am (UTC)
I absolutely love ..'Big blue Bambi eyes..' perfect! especially for Kryssa'a voice, I love her, she has great character.
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 08:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It's wonderful knowing she comes through so strongly in just this first chapter!

~X
Gem Sivad
Aug. 14th, 2011 09:54 am (UTC)
SSS
"So...have you eaten anyone?" Love it. Great six!
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 08:57 pm (UTC)
Re: SSS
Anyone who would ask that kinda deserves to be nipped at least, right? *grin*

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 11:26 am (UTC)
HAH! What a great way to start my Sunday--with a good laugh. Kryssa's sense of humor (I just typed "human," probably apropos) is delightful. I can just picture her wanting to scarf down Bambi
lexcade
Aug. 14th, 2011 11:26 am (UTC)
the above comment was me, btw :D
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 08:57 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you! And "human" is certainly apropros! :)

~X
GemmaPar
Aug. 14th, 2011 11:30 am (UTC)
Great snippet, l'm going to try to read this book soon. Really like it.
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 08:58 pm (UTC)
Thanks, Gemma! It doesn't come out until October, but you can read Shifting Passions in the meantime. :)

~X
LisaFoxRomance
Aug. 14th, 2011 02:02 pm (UTC)
That is just plain 100% awesome.
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 08:59 pm (UTC)
And this is 100% the sweetest thing! :)

~X
lizculver.wordpress.com
Aug. 14th, 2011 03:01 pm (UTC)
I totally love Kryssa's attitude. You write that edginess so subtley and so well! Love it.
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Liz! She flowed so naturally it's great to know I did her justice.

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 03:07 pm (UTC)
Don't stop there!

Great six!
LaynaPimentel
Aug. 14th, 2011 03:08 pm (UTC)
Sorry that last comment was from me Layna. :)
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:16 pm (UTC)
*GRIN*

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 03:13 pm (UTC)
Funny!
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:16 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

~X
TarynElliottFic
Aug. 14th, 2011 04:00 pm (UTC)
LOL
Love the snark that's going right over her head. Great Six!
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:18 pm (UTC)
Re: LOL
She's definitely not the sharpest knife in the drawer, even if her bubbly little heart is in the right place. :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 04:01 pm (UTC)
Great! What a question? Lol! I love this six. Good work.

~Piper
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:31 pm (UTC)
I know, righ? Who asks someone that? But trust me, I've met folks that would do it.

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 05:49 pm (UTC)
Hilarious
Love that last line!

Jessica Knauss
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:31 pm (UTC)
Re: Hilarious
Thanks, I'm very fond of it! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 05:51 pm (UTC)
lol! I think Bambi better watch herself!! Great six!
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:32 pm (UTC)
Considering how others have faired, she certainly should! *grin*

~X
Kerrianne_xx
Aug. 14th, 2011 05:57 pm (UTC)
A great six xx
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:32 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 06:26 pm (UTC)
Ha! Great six!

Dee Carney
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:36 pm (UTC)
Thanks, Dee! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 07:20 pm (UTC)
Sandi Sookoo
lol can't wait for this book!
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:50 pm (UTC)
Re: Sandi Sookoo
I'm so excited! I can't wait for October! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 14th, 2011 08:18 pm (UTC)
Great six! First time here...so I had to go back and get caught up ;)
Lyncee
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:52 pm (UTC)
Welcome! Glad you enjoyed it enough to catch up! :)

~X
viviendean
Aug. 14th, 2011 10:28 pm (UTC)
The humor that comes through in the very real reactions is great. Thanks for sharing!
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 09:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, it felt very real writing it! :)

~X
(Anonymous)
Aug. 15th, 2011 12:39 am (UTC)
Bambi is begging to be lunch.

Cara Bristol
http://www.carabristol.com
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 10:02 pm (UTC)
That's what I'm sayin'! :)

~X
cw1985
Aug. 15th, 2011 04:21 pm (UTC)
Nice six, and love the little 'mood' avatar of Sam... *drools*
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 10:07 pm (UTC)
Yeah, he had nothing to do with my six, but I just liked looking at him! :)

~X
stalkingfiction.com
Aug. 15th, 2011 08:56 pm (UTC)
I think Kryssa just stabbed Bambi with her barbed tongue. LOL! You do that edgy wit so well.
xakara
Aug. 15th, 2011 10:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! I really appreciate that. :)

~X
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